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 5.ways to have a good life.
rookie_visitor

Joined: Sun Jun 19, 2011 7:25 pm
Posts: 6
Tue Aug 09, 2011 9:11 pm
1. Run as fast as you can is someone says the bus stop is coming then your mom will be joking.
2.Be a good reader and tickle friends that only like to be tickled and eat only cookies for lunch.
3.Bring up stuff you heard from a kids televison show such as clay is an earthly substance composed of
igeneous and metamorphic rock and practice singing with a high pitched voice and eat pizza.
4.Make concerts at school and school made posters and only invite good friends of yours.
5.Tell stories to your older sister and to your stuffed animals and munch on saucy garlic nuts.
THERE YA GO 5 WAYS TO HAVE A GOOD LIFE! very-happy woman                                                                                                                                              

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 Re: 5.ways to have a good life.
new

Joined: Sun Jul 22, 2012 10:56 pm
Posts: 20
Mon Jul 23, 2012 1:32 pm
oh reading to my teddies will take a long time cause i have more then 50!



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