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 A bird. A series of haikus

Joined: Wed Feb 17, 2016 12:28 am
Posts: 31
Mon Mar 07, 2016 11:42 pm

I hear a bird chirping

I wonder where it lives life

I follow the sound 


It sings forever

Where is it going, somewhere?

I follow the sound.


There you are, don't leave!

Will you come sing your grand song?

It moves on, elsewhere.


I found you little bird!

Come sing to me, beautiful

I have found that sound.



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