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what do you think?
Poll ended at Tue Jul 10, 2012 10:01 pm
.........[speachless] 100%  100%  [ 2 ]
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it was great 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
........[unsure] 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
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Total votes : 2
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 a dark night...

Joined: Tue Oct 25, 2011 3:47 pm
Posts: 144
Wed Jun 06, 2012 10:01 pm
A dark night.
*
Living
Outside with
Violet
Endings.
*
Out
Far
*
Missing
You.
*
Living
Inside with
Fiery
Embers that
*
Almost always
Never
Die out.
*
I’m
Making
* So much
Out of
*
Almost nothing.
Losing
On a
Never
Ending game.
*
Hours of (almost)
Ever
Lasting
Powers.
*
Moving on
Endless songs.
*
Best to
End things when
(Living)
In a world of
Violet
Embers.
*
Can
Our
Minds
Ever remember
*
Home.
Our
Moment of power
Everlasting.



 Re: a dark night...
moderator

Joined: Tue Dec 27, 2005 9:14 pm
Posts: 1714
Tue Jun 12, 2012 12:31 am
Hi jadeprincess3, Either you did some tricky HTML to format your poem that way or the text editor is fixed!! Either one would make me very impressed!!! Just wanted to congratulate you on your coding if you did do the HTML and also, remind you to post work you want feedback on on the Post Work In Progress boards. These are just for talking about poems and writing them! Best, Write It Mod



 Re: a dark night...

Joined: Tue Oct 25, 2011 3:47 pm
Posts: 144
Thu Jun 14, 2012 1:14 am
thankee, Mod. i'll repost it.



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