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 A Funny Script. Read. XD

Joined: Wed Sep 23, 2009 7:48 pm
Posts: 2891
Sun Oct 17, 2010 3:42 pm
(It's the middle of winter. Rain is pouring down endlessly on a Saturday morning.)
Rachel: *gets out of bed, stretches her head up to see the weather, and sighs* It's raining again....
(She puts the blinds down)
Rachel: *smiles in a content way* This is more like it. If I don't see rain, I could always imagine it being sunny and cheerful outside.
(thunder booms in the distance, wind picks up)
Rachel: Never mind.
(Rachel gets out of bed and tiptoes downstairs. She sees if anybody was sleeping on the couch. Rachel's younger brother, Drake, was sleeping)
Drake: *mutters in sleep* What....Time is ..... It.....
Rachel: It's 8:30.
Drake: *snorts and wakes up* What the heck are you doing here....?!
Rachel: (confused) Um, I was going to fix my breakfast-
Drake: Why did you answer me?
Rachel: Because-
Drake: Why?
Rachel: Because-
Rachel: What does this have to do with pancakes?
Drake: I don't know. Oh, can I have some toast with pancakes?
Rachel: I don't know how to make pancakes.
Drake: I'll make them.
(Drake gets off of couch, goes to the stove)
Drake: Toaaaast and paaaancakessss.
Rachel: I don't want to know how the pancakes turn out. *sighs and storms off.
LOL it's not that funny. :P

 Re: A Funny Script. Read. XD

Joined: Sun Aug 09, 2009 1:20 pm
Posts: 5477
Fri Nov 05, 2010 8:21 pm
That's pretty funny.... :0 (Did I just make that mistaek?)

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