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 Re: A Humorous Play. PLEASE READ AND COMMENT!!!!
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Joined: Tue Jul 31, 2012 1:17 am
Posts: 1
Tue Jul 31, 2012 1:33 am
omg i would totally buy this if this was a book and if it was made into a play i would go see it your really good at writing cant wait to see the rest of this.



 Re: A Humorous Play. PLEASE READ AND COMMENT!!!!
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Joined: Sun Mar 17, 2013 3:45 pm
Posts: 24
Sun Mar 17, 2013 10:15 pm
Awesome. Not that confusing though. Does your mom really ask you that ?



 Re: A Humorous Play. PLEASE READ AND COMMENT!!!!
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Joined: Mon Apr 01, 2013 2:26 am
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Thu Apr 11, 2013 12:56 am
It's really good ! Cant wait to see the rest ;)



 Re: A Humorous Play. PLEASE READ AND COMMENT!!!!
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Joined: Thu Apr 25, 2013 3:45 am
Posts: 1
Thu Apr 25, 2013 4:24 am
Wow, that was pretty good but.................where is the end of it ? I mean I don't know about you but the minute I start something, I want to finish it . So I was just wondering if you are still working on it or not. ONCE AGAIN the sketch was great. Keep up the good work!!!! Btw:please reply



 Re: A Humorous Play. PLEASE READ AND COMMENT!!!!
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Joined: Tue May 07, 2013 11:00 pm
Posts: 2
Wed May 22, 2013 9:58 pm
well i think that the play was....AMAZING but.....the other girl read a dog book WOWZA shes DUMB!!p.s.how do u make a play??(im a writer need to write!)



 Re: A Humorous Play. PLEASE READ AND COMMENT!!!!
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Joined: Tue May 07, 2013 11:00 pm
Posts: 2
Wed May 22, 2013 10:07 pm
ME:um my play is called swimming with the Mermaids:characters:kate,ashley,taylor,kerance:kate:OMG!! taylor there is a BIG BEE on your hair.taylor:AHH GET IT OFF!!kate:i was just jokinghahah:taylor:kate WHY DONT EVER DO THAT AGAIN!!!kate:cant u take a joke?? me:preview people!!



 Re: A Humorous Play. PLEASE READ AND COMMENT!!!!
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Joined: Thu May 23, 2013 9:28 pm
Posts: 4
Fri May 24, 2013 9:04 pm
That is an awesome play. Unlike some people, you actually put in the dialog. It is a very well written play. Also please be my friend (...). So farwell for now.



 Re: A Humorous Play. PLEASE READ AND COMMENT!!!!
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Joined: Thu May 09, 2013 1:02 am
Posts: 2
Tue Jun 04, 2013 10:56 pm
I have a name- Love gone wrong



 Re: A Humorous Play. PLEASE READ AND COMMENT!!!!
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Joined: Fri Jan 04, 2013 9:06 pm
Posts: 66
Mon Jul 22, 2013 7:34 pm
this is funny and i think you could just have the humorous play as a funny title for it



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Joined: Wed Jul 24, 2013 1:20 pm
Posts: 269
Thu Aug 22, 2013 5:26 pm
this is soooo cool and funny!!! :lol: i love the Mean Girls reference!! ( i love that movie!) plz plz plz write more!!!


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 Re: A Humorous Play. PLEASE READ AND COMMENT!!!!
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Joined: Sun Oct 20, 2013 2:16 am
Posts: 1
Sun Oct 20, 2013 3:31 pm
lol "all up in my asparagus"LOLOL ROFL LOL COOL AID LOLOLOL ROFLMPO haha anywho whare is the rest this is AWESOMES!



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Joined: Thu May 22, 2014 8:59 pm
Posts: 42
Sat Jun 07, 2014 11:25 pm

U MUST KEEP WRITING THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank u for ur time,

creekclimbing11




 Re: A Humorous Play. PLEASE READ AND COMMENT!!!!
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Joined: Tue Apr 29, 2014 9:38 pm
Posts: 14
Thu Jun 12, 2014 4:31 pm

how about the title "The Life of Christy (last name)"!! Other than that the mom and Lauren were hilarious!! Christy isn't supposed to be funny right? Was the second page continued about the play or something else!!




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