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 A Humourous Story That's Actually Real :o

Joined: Sun Jul 10, 2011 6:08 pm
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Sat Mar 03, 2012 1:36 am

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~A Humourous Story That's Actually Real~
I'm obsessed with British people. And, since I have a VERY good, amazingly fudgefully SPECTACULAR, cupcakingly good British accent, me and my friend Breeanna use British accents all the time.

One day, I decided I was Adele's cousin. And she was taking me to court, because I am stalking her.

And there, it all started.

The next day, Banana, (for that is her nickname) in her very BAD British accent, (Sorry, dude..) asked how court went. So I said, in my very fudgefully AWESOME British accent, (BURNAGE!! Sorry again, dude..) "Actually, I tackled her. So she has a restraining order against me."

So now we keep talking in British accents.

And that, my friends, is why my throat hurts.




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Sun Apr 29, 2012 3:01 am

 Re: A Humourous Story That's Actually Real :o

Joined: Mon Jun 13, 2011 1:10 pm
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Thu Jun 28, 2012 4:01 pm
I'm British. I hope you didn't do a posh accent... makes me angry when Americans try that one...

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Thu Jul 26, 2012 5:34 pm
Intresting but good!

 Re: A Humourous Story That's Actually Real :o

Joined: Sun Nov 20, 2011 5:57 pm
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Fri Aug 17, 2012 10:09 am could probably do better. This is very, i don't know, uninteresting, not humorous (TO ME).

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Joined: Sat Sep 22, 2012 12:29 am
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Wed Nov 14, 2012 12:02 am
That reminds me of the time I had some friends over for a sleepover, and my pal McKenzie made a prank call using a British accent to her babysitter's boyfriend! I STILL don't know how she got his number. p.s. LOL

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Sat Sep 21, 2013 9:06 pm
LOL epicink2 are you really British? WAY COOL

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Tue Jul 08, 2014 10:05 am

Whenever Americans do a British accent, they either speak "the Queen's English," or an over-exaggerated low-class Cockney accent. Whenever British people do an American accent, they do a Southern accent.

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Wed Dec 16, 2015 1:40 am

isisghost3: :D Lol! :d

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Tue Mar 01, 2016 4:47 am

? I am puzzled by this story. My cousin would still laugh if he read this. As for accents, people always assume everyone from a certain place has an accent. I lived in Georgia for a long time and when I moved to California everyone was asking what happened to my accent. Asnwer: I never had one. 

By the way, everyone does exaggerate English accents. I as well can do a fairly good accent, as my dad is from England and I learned a lot of my early words from eavesdropping on his facetimes. It took me a while to realize when people said truck, they meant a lorry... English accents are fairly simple due to the fact it is primaririly a difference in the pronounciation of the vowels. In one, they are louder and more emphasized, in the other they are softer. There is also variation in the pronounciation of consononts in different languages as well... Languages truly are a beautiful thing...

Though I trust you are telling the truth, this story has me struggling to believe it. Wouldn't the whole world have heard of it? Then again, I am oblivious to a lot of things...

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Joined: Tue May 10, 2016 11:32 pm
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Thu Jun 09, 2016 10:05 pm

sorry that is not funny maby you should make a roll play have people watch it and have them tell you what they think and if they think it's funny post it

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Wed Apr 19, 2017 6:10 pm

@isisghost3 Very funny! Since you love British people I'll take you to Paris,France when I'm older in exchange to meet Adele if she's still alive! :P

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