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 a poem from my boyfriend
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Joined: Sat Jul 18, 2015 8:17 am
Posts: 2
Sat Jul 18, 2015 8:54 am

rose's are red

violets are blue

out fo a million

i choose you

i'l take your hand

and hold you close

and tell you i love you the most heartheartheart




 Re: a poem from my boyfriend
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Joined: Sun Sep 27, 2015 1:31 am
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Mon Sep 28, 2015 2:01 am

That's so sweet! Congratulations on having such an adorable boyfriend! You are very lucky!wink




 Re: a poem from my boyfriend
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Joined: Sat Feb 27, 2016 3:10 pm
Posts: 68
Sat Mar 26, 2016 4:49 pm

He lucky to have you because a poem like that is very sweet! heart




 Re: a poem from my boyfriend
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Joined: Fri May 06, 2016 9:38 pm
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Sat May 07, 2016 10:42 pm

so sweet heartheartheartheartheart




 Re: a poem from my boyfriend
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Joined: Sun Jan 10, 2016 1:27 am
Posts: 12
Sat May 28, 2016 6:07 pm

Oh, that is SO sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!! Where ARE guys like that at my school? Well, I know one guy who would do it for me, he's so nice, and I think he likes me. I like him. Time will tell I guess!heart




 Re: a poem from my boyfriend
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Joined: Sun Nov 20, 2016 10:34 pm
Posts: 35
Fri Jan 06, 2017 9:41 pm

Awwwwww!!!!!!!!So adorible.heartI had a boyfriend once,he loved me and I loved him, but he dumped me.angryindecision




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