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 A random poem, by Stormwinds

Joined: Sun Aug 09, 2015 4:25 pm
Posts: 5
Tue Apr 19, 2016 11:38 pm

I whirl around,

Lost in eternity,

Lost in time,

lost in my mind.

I seek an exit,

but there is never one.

just when I see the light,

It fades,

Leaving me in darkness.

I wonder constantly,

What did I do to deserve this?

And yet I know, I know.

They were angry,

Angry I wasn't like them.

Angry I was different.

So they send me here,

Hoping to break me,

Hoping to crush me.

They laugh at me because I'm different.

Yet I laugh at them back.


Because they sacrificed

What makes them unique.

Yes, I know, it's horrible.

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