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 A song by Isisghost3- I can't breathe
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Joined: Sun Jul 10, 2011 6:08 pm
Posts: 165
Sun Apr 01, 2012 10:55 pm

Irresistable

I've known you since the beginning

But you've acted like I'm new

You can run round sinning

But I still dream of you

Am I predictable

I know I am

She's irresistable

But I can give so much more that she can't

~Chorus~

Forgive me for not telling you

It makes so much more sense

I could play it off as the midwest girl story

But you live so close to me

I can't breathe, I can't breathe

~Verse~

I'm thinking this end could be beginning

You've grown on me, but so fresh, so new

Baby, it's wrong

But I still dream of you

~Repeat Chorus~

 

;(...

 




 Re: A song by Isisghost3- I can't breathe
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Joined: Sun Jul 10, 2011 6:08 pm
Posts: 165
Tue Apr 10, 2012 10:08 pm

Sorry, guys. It was supposed to be titled I can't breathe -.o




 Re: A song by Isisghost3- I can't breathe

Joined: Tue Oct 25, 2011 3:47 pm
Posts: 144
Wed Jun 06, 2012 10:18 pm
i still think it's awsome, no matter what te title!



 Re: A song by Isisghost3- I can't breathe
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Joined: Mon May 13, 2013 4:38 pm
Posts: 5
Thu May 23, 2013 5:35 pm
are you a guy or girl? a girl oh well every girl can write a great song! a boy though! amazing!



 Re: A song by Isisghost3- I can't breathe
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Joined: Fri Jun 07, 2013 1:05 am
Posts: 1
Fri Jun 07, 2013 1:32 am
I LOVE THAT SONG!!!!!!! You are a really good artist I love your song I can't breathe. I am a song writer to but I have never written a song that good. My friend Madi and I read it together and it was AMAZING!!!! I am going to post some of my work. Please review it and tell me if it is good thanks



 Re: A song by Isisghost3- I can't breathe
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Joined: Thu Jun 06, 2013 7:00 pm
Posts: 24
Sun Aug 04, 2013 7:09 pm
It sounds like you have a great future ahead of you. I wish for you to keep writing these amazing songs if it's the last thing you do. I am proud of your work so don't ever let your dreams down. Be confident and you will find your way.



 Re: A song by Isisghost3- I can't breathe

Joined: Sun Nov 20, 2011 5:57 pm
Posts: 110
Sun Nov 24, 2013 9:34 pm
ohh thats reallly good! i wish i can write as good!



 Re: A song by Isisghost3- I can't breathe
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Joined: Fri Jun 06, 2014 2:27 am
Posts: 1
Sun Jun 15, 2014 9:08 pm

awesome!cool




 Re: A song by Isisghost3- I can't breathe
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Joined: Wed Jun 18, 2014 3:42 pm
Posts: 1
Wed Jun 18, 2014 3:53 pm

heartcool song i like it i wish people like my songs




 Re: A song by Isisghost3- I can't breathe
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Joined: Thu May 22, 2014 12:15 am
Posts: 356
Fri Jun 27, 2014 10:29 pm

Amazing!!! When i looked at it i didnt just read it i started singing with this amazing beat!!!!!! R u a good singer? Cause if u r u could become famous and write your own songs!!!! 




 Re: A song by Isisghost3- I can't breathe
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Joined: Thu Jul 03, 2014 11:18 pm
Posts: 1
Wed Jul 09, 2014 3:27 pm

wow 




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