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 A spy and a beginning friendship.
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Joined: Wed Feb 17, 2016 12:28 am
Posts: 31
Mon Mar 14, 2016 11:20 pm

I was here

I was there

Not in the place I belong

 

Running

Hiding

Sneaking around

 

That is my life

I see you there

Mirroring my actions

 

Don't get scared

By my appearence

Or our age difference

 

It's okay

Relax

It's only me

 

Or is it?

 




 Re: A spy and a beginning friendship.
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Joined: Sat Nov 08, 2014 11:05 pm
Posts: 66
Fri Mar 25, 2016 5:08 pm
I like mysterious things, so when u said "or is it?" I got a few goose bumps!! Lol. Is that a poem u wrote, or is it from a book or something like that?



 Re: A spy and a beginning friendship.
new

Joined: Fri May 06, 2016 9:38 pm
Posts: 12
Sun May 08, 2016 4:35 pm

    you are not a spy




 Re: A spy and a beginning friendship.
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Joined: Fri Aug 01, 2014 12:15 am
Posts: 48
Fri May 27, 2016 10:22 pm

i loved the little twist in that peom! amazing job!




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