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 A unicorn Christmas lesson
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Joined: Thu Nov 24, 2016 2:28 pm
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Sat Nov 26, 2016 11:06 pm

Introduction:

If you like Unicorns, then read this.But remember,this is only 2 and1 line of chapters.Have fun!

 

Chapter 1:

Holly,Jolly and Nichalas,3 unicorns who lived in a place called Christmas Place,were trouble makers.One morning they were throwing snowballs at windows.And boy did they learn a lesson.

Chapter 2:

"Nichalas!Holly!Jolly!Dinner!"shouted their sweet mother,Jingle Belle.

Well,I hope you liked it.Thank you for reading this.Bye!




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