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 Aedon's struggle.
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Joined: Fri Jan 22, 2016 6:02 pm
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Tue Mar 08, 2016 6:16 pm
Prolog
 
"Hurry up Titania , they're coming" Aedon had a sort of power in his voice. He could make you stand on your head if he told you to. "The place is gonna collapse if we don't leave now." He was right already we could hear the support beams creaking under the stress of the building. "I can't see where I'm going Aedon." I felt a hand grab my wrist and pull me through the dark smoking building.
 
 
Chapter one
 
I'm Titania a highschool student who likes to run. I'm in track at my school. while I was running one day, I met a boy. "Hi, I'm Aedon" He said his black hair swaying in his face. "I'm titania" 



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