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 All people of earth.......

Joined: Wed Jan 30, 2008 2:24 pm
Posts: 35
Wed Feb 06, 2008 6:40 pm
Hey all people of earth,( mars is accepted too ).  I need a cool, diffrent, and wicked title for a book I'm writting:
Charlie and Samantha ( called Sam ) are two kids that live on a farm.
They live down by a creek that they play in often. There is a old man who
also lives by the creek. He trys to scare them off every time he sees them.
Charlie and Sam are going through tough times in their life. THeir Aunt Jennel,
has left the family, and won't be back for a long time. Aunt Jennel calls Sam
Sammie every time she saw her. Now that she's gone, when people call
her Sammie, she thinks of Aunt Jennel and either cries or storms off.
Will she ever recover? Will she ever be the same without Aunt Jennel?
Sooo..... What do you think?
Hey I NEED a title. All sugestions are great

 Re: All people of earth.......

Joined: Sat Oct 06, 2007 1:59 pm
Posts: 1318
Sun Apr 06, 2008 7:05 pm
That is a GREAT story idea.
Most authors come up with their own titles--after writing the story. It makes it more personalized.
However, the only thing I can come up with is "Finding a Place".
I can't wait for you to put this story on the boards! It sounds like a really inspirational read!!
Happy Writing,

 Re: All people of earth.......

Joined: Tue Apr 22, 2008 6:30 pm
Posts: 189
Tue Apr 22, 2008 10:20 pm
Greetings, Earthling. I agree that 'Don't Call Me Sammie' would be a good title, or maybe 'What's In A Name', but the last has probably been used before.
                  Miss X
*I thought you lived at a school*

 Re: All people of earth.......

Joined: Fri May 09, 2008 7:24 am
Posts: 1308
Fri May 09, 2008 8:19 pm
One could be: "a heart cracked forever" that might sound dumb but I think it's cool.

 Re: All people of earth.......

Joined: Mon Oct 25, 2010 4:36 pm
Posts: 10
Tue Sep 06, 2011 5:00 pm
maybe Memories?

 Re: All people of earth.......

Joined: Sat Jan 28, 2012 7:58 pm
Posts: 65
Sun Mar 18, 2012 8:17 pm

mabe...creepy creek or somethin' like that!

 Re: All people of earth.......

Joined: Thu Mar 29, 2012 11:21 pm
Posts: 6
Sat Mar 31, 2012 12:04 am

 I Have question are they brother and sister?

I know this may sound sily but what about  Creek Memories

 Re: All people of earth.......

Joined: Sat Mar 03, 2012 8:53 pm
Posts: 7
Sun Apr 01, 2012 6:28 pm
Hard Times or Two Friends

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