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 ANOTHER original song... More
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Joined: Sun Jul 10, 2011 6:08 pm
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Mon Jan 30, 2012 12:02 am

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The one with the sweetest smile

I met him today

I'm losing my mind, trying to think of words to say

The one with the prettiest eyes

I told him today

And the words escape my mouth, which ones to say

 

Just a verse. I'll post more later... cya.




 Re: ANOTHER original song... More
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Sat Feb 18, 2012 10:50 pm

~Chorus~

You give hints, but it's not enough

Can't tell if you really mean it, I'm giving up

I want to scream, want to level the score

Just want to fall and lose myself in time

I'm wanting more, more, more

Just already, baby, won't you be mine?




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