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 Autumn
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Joined: Fri Sep 04, 2015 3:18 pm
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Thu Sep 17, 2015 8:45 pm

                                Wind

                                                                Blowing briskly

                                                                Leaves fall

                                                                                From

                                                                                                The

                                                                                                                Trees

                                                                We rake

                                                                Colored leaves

                                                                                In

                                                                                A

                                                                                Big

                                                                                Pile.

                                                               

                                                                And jump.




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Joined: Fri Jan 01, 2016 2:18 pm
Posts: 2
Sat Jan 02, 2016 2:36 pm

very good, fluent poetry. i think that concrete poetry is the best type and you did it perfectly. Good job.




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