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Joined: Sun Aug 21, 2016 6:18 pm
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Sun Aug 21, 2016 6:22 pm


Oh, barbies

With your plastic bodies,

With your pasted smiles,

How do you feel?

Manufactured to perfection,

A guarantee of love and fame.

With most of your hair and eyes

bright shades of blonde and blue

And your makeup flawless.

And your prince charming at your doorstep...

With anything you've ever wanted to the finger tips.

Anyone you've wanted.

I hate you, yet I envy you

Because unlike you, 

I am imperfect...

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