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 Best Friends For Never~Mysterysolver534
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Joined: Sat Feb 27, 2010 12:06 pm
Posts: 1102
Thu Apr 28, 2011 8:23 pm
We were friends
That was long ago
We hung out like sisters
We said weird stuff
We did cool things
But that was long ago
 
Now now you've changed yourself
And your crowd of friends
And guess what?
I wasn't included
 
Now we are
Best friends for never!
For a long time now, we are
Best friends for never
 
We hund out in class
We sat together at lunch
It's like we were connected at the hip
They called us "conjoined twins"
But that was long ago
 
Now now you've changed yourself
And your crowd of friends
And guess what?
I wasn't included
 
Now we are
Best friends for never!
For a long time now, we are
Best friends for never
 
Guess what?
Over the years I figures out you were two faced.
You talked about me to the others
You talked about the others to me
It's like you had an alter ego
That came out when you were with me
 
You accused me of things
You screamed at me
You bullied me
And talked behind my back
 
You convinced others that I was strange
You convinced others that you're innocent
But guess what?
I know better
 
Now we are
Best friends for never(never!)
For a long time we are
Best friends for never(never!)
(repeat twice)
 
Best friends for never
This song is based on a real friend I had. Not a great friend, right?
 
 
 



 Re: Best Friends For Never~Mysterysolver534
regular_contributor

Joined: Sat Jun 16, 2007 5:17 pm
Posts: 7691
Sun Jun 05, 2011 10:51 pm
cool song and I'd like 2 be ur friend



 Re: Best Friends For Never~Mysterysolver534
visitor

Joined: Tue Jun 07, 2011 7:28 am
Posts: 26
Fri Jun 10, 2011 6:23 pm
Oo cool I liked it



 Re: Best Friends For Never~Mysterysolver534

Joined: Wed Jun 08, 2011 6:03 pm
Posts: 1
Wed Jun 29, 2011 6:09 pm
yes she was not right i would like to be your frind
 
 



 Re: Best Friends For Never~Mysterysolver534
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Joined: Mon Jul 04, 2011 5:02 pm
Posts: 90
Fri Jul 08, 2011 12:59 pm
Hey that's a really good song and i know how you feel. Same thing happend to me!!  Friend me! I'm aquafire8 tongue smiley



 Re: Best Friends For Never~Mysterysolver534

Joined: Tue Oct 11, 2011 9:53 am
Posts: 3
Sun Nov 04, 2012 11:14 pm
That was a song with feelings i have felt before, with my friend who is always doing things to me



 Re: Best Friends For Never~Mysterysolver534
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Joined: Sat Mar 16, 2013 4:24 pm
Posts: 150
Sun Apr 07, 2013 2:41 pm
That's an AWESOME song!!! I'd like to be your friend!



Will U B my friend?????



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