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 Blink chapter one

Joined: Sun Apr 06, 2014 1:43 pm
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Fri May 16, 2014 7:43 pm
"Life..." the young mother sobbed into her newly born daughter's thin blond hair "...Is a powerful thing" she gave out a loud hiccupy noise "Don't blink,'ll miss everything" she cradled her baby close to her chest and pressed her head into the child, who was wrapped in a very intricate blanket, sewn by her grandmother. "Someday you'll understand...that I'm doing this for you and..." a light flashed some where in the distance, and in a matter of seconds, the mother bolted, leaving her three day old child in a cardboard box in the middle of the woods. So um....yeah(: that's that. Please comment what you think the daughters name should be I've come up with some ideas but I'd love to hear yours!

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Joined: Tue Jun 24, 2014 1:13 am
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Wed Jun 25, 2014 12:13 am

I think Aspen or Raegan would be pretty

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Joined: Thu Jun 26, 2014 6:07 pm
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Thu Jun 26, 2014 6:41 pm

i think her name should be marybell

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Joined: Wed Jul 24, 2013 9:27 pm
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Sun Jul 06, 2014 2:44 pm

i think it should be gwendolyn

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Joined: Tue Dec 09, 2014 3:12 am
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Thu Dec 11, 2014 3:45 am

Her name should be Theresa.

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Joined: Mon Mar 02, 2015 1:04 am
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Mon Mar 02, 2015 1:50 am

Quinn. And she doesn't know her last name.. heart

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