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 book idea need title
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Joined: Thu May 15, 2014 10:07 pm
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Mon Jul 07, 2014 12:47 am

"Luna you need to get ready to go!" yelled my foster mom Grace, "You don't want to be late for Camp Pinecrest, Tessa will be picking you up in ten minutes."

"I'm coming Grace!" I yelled down the stairs, "John will you help me with my bags"

"I will Luna but please stop calling me John. Will you please call me dad?" said John.

"John! You know well that  Luna will not call you dad because of what happened to her father"

"I know, I know, It's just that..." John's voice faded as he walked into the kitchen to kiss Grace.

"Grace, John, Tessa is here" i yelled as I hurried outside into Tessa's car.

"Oh My God! I missed you so much!" yelled Tessa.

 
 



 Re: book idea need title
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Joined: Thu Feb 28, 2013 3:46 pm
Posts: 75
Fri Aug 01, 2014 11:24 pm

You need to write more, and then I could recomend a title.

~Extremebownie

 




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