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 Books! It's a narrative poem! Tell me how it is.

Joined: Wed Feb 17, 2016 12:28 am
Posts: 31
Wed Mar 02, 2016 2:59 pm




How the time flies when reading a book

When reading in bed

Or in a cozy nook


Whatever happens, I am somehow sucked in

I am in a different world

Sometimes I grow a fin


I just dive right in 

Sometimes it's fun, sometimes it's scary

Sometimes I lose, and sometimes I win


That's how it is in a good book

I have fun,but then it's done

Now I have to go look

For a book that's not just for anyone

It's for me!





 Re: Books! It's a narrative poem! Tell me how it is.

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