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 brOKen poem
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Joined: Fri Apr 15, 2016 2:41 pm
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Sat Apr 16, 2016 5:07 pm

People tease, I cry

It's not my fault that I can't see what they want me to be,

I said I was OK but now I am brOKen,

I really tried to smile but now I am a ghost of a child.

 

I am still working on this poem. Tell me what you think about it.

 

 




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