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 CAN SOME ONE HELP ME FIND A TITLE 4 THIS STORY
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Joined: Sat Jun 16, 2007 8:45 pm
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Tue Jun 26, 2007 6:35 pm

I knew I wasn't normal like my other friends before I even knew what normal meant. When I was three mama told me god gave me a special gift but she never told me what the gift was. But I found out before my ninth birthday.It was odd and  also exciting as I watch the glass move across the room without me holding it. I jumped with anticipation calling my mama from the next room so she can see what I can do. To my surprise she wasn't so happy she scold me saying that it was bad for me to use my mind to munipulate things and never to do it again. I was a mischievous girl and I thought obeying your parents rules were for kindergardners. I was mostly home alone on the summers since mama went to work early and she would leave many chores for me to complete during the day. But what kid would do the dishes when your mind can do it for you. So I would sit on the couch watching the dishes wash it self as I eat a bowl of cereal and giggle until I choke on a piece of cheerio.

To Be Continued




 Re: CAN SOME ONE HELP ME FIND A TITLE 4 THIS STORY
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Joined: Mon Jan 02, 2006 12:15 am
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Wed Jun 27, 2007 5:42 pm
That is a cool story would like to hear more here is a tittle suggestion Wierd Minipulation



 Re: CAN SOME ONE HELP ME FIND A TITLE 4 THIS STORY
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Joined: Wed May 30, 2007 10:49 pm
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Sat Jun 30, 2007 9:53 pm
Depends, do you want the title to be humorous? or more serious? I kinda need to see more of the story, but for like humor you could call it like Cherrios or Washing Dishes or something like that....idk, let me see some more!



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Joined: Sun Jul 01, 2007 3:50 pm
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Sun Jul 01, 2007 3:54 pm
Nice story....I think a good name for this story would be, "The Girl With the Power of Munipulatation."



 Re: CAN SOME ONE HELP ME FIND A TITLE 4 THIS STORY
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Joined: Tue Oct 24, 2006 6:50 pm
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Mon Jul 02, 2007 8:34 pm
I need to see more of the story, really. It's very good writing, but I don't know what the title would be without major plot happenings. We know she has a gift, but will she use it for good? can she do other magic? Is this technically magic at all? You might not want, if this kinda is magic, to call it that. Idea: call it mind-bending. I'm pretty sure it's been used before, but not badly so. So far, my idea for a title is "The Mind-Bender".



 Re: CAN SOME ONE HELP ME FIND A TITLE 4 THIS STORY
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Joined: Tue Jun 26, 2007 1:12 pm
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Tue Jul 03, 2007 2:04 pm
WOW! That is a very good story!! you should call it 'My Hidden Secret'



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Joined: Wed Jul 04, 2007 6:47 pm
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Wed Jul 04, 2007 8:09 pm
You could call it (Who says Magic isn't Real).

Love PeanutButter



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Joined: Wed Jul 04, 2007 6:47 pm
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Wed Jul 04, 2007 8:10 pm
Who Says Magic isn't Real

Peanutbutter



 Re: CAN SOME ONE HELP ME FIND A TITLE 4 THIS STORY
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Sat Jul 07, 2007 10:29 am
I don't know...

I liked Abbey's idea about calling it the first name of the character, a bit like that Stephen King book "Carrie".

If not, how about "Normal"?


I think this story would work better with a short name like that rather than "How I Got My Telekinesis and What I Did With It".






Sapphira



 Re: CAN SOME ONE HELP ME FIND A TITLE 4 THIS STORY

Joined: Fri Jul 13, 2007 2:51 pm
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Fri Jul 13, 2007 4:07 pm
I think that you should call it Mind Manipulater.



 Re: CAN SOME ONE HELP ME FIND A TITLE 4 THIS STORY
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Joined: Tue Jul 17, 2007 7:47 pm
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Wed Jul 18, 2007 2:29 pm
Suggestions:
 
Using A Gift from God
Not Quite Normal
Mind Manipulation
Look, No Hands! (Because she does things with her mind)
Mischievious Manipulation
A Gift Gone Wrong
The Girl Who Wouldn't Obey
 
Not the best, but a worthy post :)
 



 Re: CAN SOME ONE HELP ME FIND A TITLE 4 THIS STORY
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Joined: Fri Aug 25, 2006 7:42 pm
Posts: 478
Sun Jul 22, 2007 9:58 pm
I liked GiggleGirl's idea of "Mischievous Manipulations." Or you could try "Messes, Minds, and Manipulations" - lots of alliteration! But I agree with some of the other posts, that you really should consider the whole story (there is more, right? If so, please post!) before choosing a title. Sometimes a title won't jump out at you until the entire thing is finished, even. Good luck, and don't forget to let us know what you choose!

Jessica



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Joined: Fri Aug 10, 2007 8:59 pm
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Sat Aug 11, 2007 10:44 am
I would call it "Sara's Hidden Life" I think that sounds good!
 
 
 
Peace,
Say O.K,
~Baby_V



 Re: CAN SOME ONE HELP ME FIND A TITLE 4 THIS STORY
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Joined: Wed May 30, 2007 10:49 pm
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Sun Aug 19, 2007 12:20 pm
I like Mischevious Manipulation and Look, No Hands! those are both great! I think everyone's suggestions are awesome. Have you picked a name?



 Re: CAN SOME ONE HELP ME FIND A TITLE 4 THIS STORY
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Joined: Sun Jun 03, 2007 1:31 pm
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Sat Sep 08, 2007 1:01 pm
How about:
 
 
               " A Powerful Mind "
 
                       " A Gift She Didn't Ask For "
  
 
    Love Is The Water Of Life,Drink Deeply.
 
 
 bankshot#5

Message Edited by Write_It_Moderator on 10-08-2007 12:43 PM




 Re: CAN SOME ONE HELP ME FIND A TITLE 4 THIS STORY
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Joined: Wed Jun 06, 2007 3:48 pm
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Tue Sep 18, 2007 12:01 am
look ma, No hands!
 
Don't blink
 
look what i can do
 
or something that relates to the conflict of the story



 Re: CAN SOME ONE HELP ME FIND A TITLE 4 THIS STORY
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Joined: Thu Jun 14, 2007 2:18 pm
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Sat Oct 20, 2007 5:25 pm
Dear KellyKim:

Here are some suggestions, but I think you should wait until you have more until you name it. Sometimes a story will name itself. Anyway, here are my ideas:

-The Definition of 'Normal'
-Guess What I Can Do?
-The Power of My Mind
-Moving the World

Good luck!

Sincerely,

Crystal



 Re: CAN SOME ONE HELP ME FIND A TITLE 4 THIS STORY
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Joined: Thu Jun 14, 2007 2:18 pm
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Sat Oct 20, 2007 5:28 pm
Just wanted to let all you guys know:

It's Manipulation, not

-Munipulation
-Minipulation
-or any other spelling.

Sincerely,

Crystal



 Re: CAN SOME ONE HELP ME FIND A TITLE 4 THIS STORY

Joined: Mon Oct 29, 2007 5:04 pm
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Mon Oct 29, 2007 5:22 pm
Love the story so far. Have you ever seen the movie about the little girl with powers like the one's in your story but I can't think of the name of it.
 
Tittle should be "Normal" one word can have the meaning of a thousand words
 
  -L-



 Re: CAN SOME ONE HELP ME FIND A TITLE 4 THIS STORY

Joined: Fri Oct 19, 2007 9:41 am
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Tue Oct 30, 2007 2:42 pm
Okay...So i really like this and it is very interesting.My name is Mary (...) and i am 14 years old.My life is normal at times and so wierd at other times but anyways....that is totally off subject....Sorry about all the dots i put(its a bad habbit).....so please message me....

 

 

 

P.S.-I love Adventure books

Message Edited by Write_It_Moderator on 10-31-2007 10:05 AM




 Re: CAN SOME ONE HELP ME FIND A TITLE 4 THIS STORY

Joined: Fri Oct 19, 2007 9:41 am
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Tue Oct 30, 2007 2:45 pm
call this story      "My Not So Normal Life"
 
?mary?



 Re: CAN SOME ONE HELP ME FIND A TITLE 4 THIS STORY
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Joined: Tue Jan 17, 2012 11:52 pm
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Sun Jan 27, 2013 8:25 pm
HOW ABOUT: "MY MAGIC GIFT". FROM, dreamtimepink9



 Re: CAN SOME ONE HELP ME FIND A TITLE 4 THIS STORY
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Joined: Tue Jun 11, 2013 1:12 am
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Tue Jul 23, 2013 9:30 pm
Maybe "The gift of Mindpower"



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Tue Aug 06, 2013 5:20 pm
disobeying mamas muniplolation law



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