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 Can't Handle It

Joined: Tue Oct 21, 2008 9:41 pm
Posts: 2505
Wed Jan 11, 2012 12:07 am



Yesterday, I had to walk the dogs with my family. It's January, of course, but for the past week, it's been in the seventies for the past week.


So I skip downstairs, wearing just a longsleeved shirt and a pair of jeans. Before I go outside, my mom stops me and says, "Hey. You might want to put a jacket on - it's cold out of there."


I'll admit it. I ignored her. But, in my defense, this is Texas. 'Cold out there' means 55 degrees. Tops. Anything colder is 'below freezing'. Anyway, I brush her off, thinking that because I'm not a native Texas, I'd be able to handle it.


Let me tell you, folks:


I. Can't. Handle. It.


I get halfway around the block, and I am freezing to death. And the whole time I'm walking, I'm kicking myself for not putting on a stinkin' jacket.


In addition to that, I'm feeling really stupid, because who am I kidding?


I may not have been born here, but Texas has made me a complete and total cold wimp.


I just can't handle it. ;)




 Re: Can't Handle It

Joined: Fri Dec 25, 2009 9:19 pm
Posts: 452
Sun Jan 15, 2012 4:35 pm

Sounds good!  Keep going please!

 Re: Can't Handle It

Joined: Sun Jul 10, 2011 6:08 pm
Posts: 165
Sat Mar 03, 2012 1:39 am

Yay! xD Funneh.

 Re: Can't Handle It

Joined: Fri Mar 23, 2012 1:23 pm
Posts: 2
Tue Apr 10, 2012 2:05 pm

hopefuly you handled it by now. Hope u get better @ it.smiley

 Re: Can't Handle It

Joined: Wed Feb 27, 2013 10:07 pm
Posts: 79
Fri Mar 29, 2013 10:23 am
Where i live, we use Celsius, and you are so stinkin' LUCKY! 55 Fahrenheit equals 12.777777777777779 Celsius! THAT'S LIKE SUMMER HERE! WHEN IT'S THAT WARM OUT WE WEAR SHORTS AND TEE-SHIRTS! well, hope all goes well. Remember the sunscreen.

 Re: Can't Handle It

Joined: Sat May 08, 2010 3:22 pm
Posts: 549
Sat Apr 20, 2013 6:14 am
"I. Can't. Handle. It." Hooting with laughter! Very blunt!

 Re: Can't Handle It

Joined: Mon Apr 15, 2013 2:46 pm
Posts: 1
Tue May 21, 2013 9:08 pm
hello i can't handle it either im a 6 grader whats up 6 grade peeps

 Re: Can't Handle It

Joined: Mon May 13, 2013 2:19 pm
Posts: 4
Thu Jul 04, 2013 7:01 pm
I cant handle a lot of smoke

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