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 car ride

Joined: Sun Nov 20, 2016 10:34 pm
Posts: 35
Mon Jan 02, 2017 5:44 pm

mom took me on a car ride for christmas.

i had to sit beside my bratty sister.

i wanted to hide.

but i was too tied.

like always i cried.

of course that cry was fake.

so i lied.

it seems like my sister was trying to be my guide.

no madder how hard i tried,

i could not ignore that fried bratt.

i wish i could have flied,

or i wish that i died.

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