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 Chapter One of a Fantasy Novel-Please help think of a title!
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Joined: Tue Jun 21, 2016 12:07 am
Posts: 10
Tue Jun 28, 2016 11:58 pm

So, hey! This is Chapter One of  the novel I'm writing, but it's sort of like the introduction. I sort of need a title, so... suggestions? Also, leave constructive criticism in the comments please!

 

“Claire, get up! It’s the first day of school, and you-know-who is giving a speech you-know where for you-know what, at dusk. I know you really don’t like him, but it’s our duty as citizens!” Those words don’t sound like much, but they marked the beginning of one fateful day, a day that  would start protests, fights, and allegiances. Those words ring in my dreams sometimes. But now… now isn’t the time to discuss this. I am here for one purpose, and one purpose only-- to inform you about...everything. You may think this is a myth, and believe what you must, future readers. I need to record this for when the time is right. You will know when it is. It all started when a man wearing a black cloak appeared in the middle of the amphitheatre, unnoticed.




 Re: Chapter One of a Fantasy Novel-Please help think of a ti
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Joined: Tue May 17, 2016 8:14 pm
Posts: 11
Fri Jul 01, 2016 12:26 am

hi is it all right to put some more info because im stumped on a title other than that it sounds like a good book




 Re: Chapter One of a Fantasy Novel-Please help think of a ti
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Joined: Wed May 11, 2016 8:01 pm
Posts: 269
Sun Jul 03, 2016 3:47 am

The Dark Day?

-Dragoncrown485




 Re: Chapter One of a Fantasy Novel-Please help think of a ti
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Joined: Tue Jun 21, 2016 12:07 am
Posts: 10
Fri Jul 22, 2016 2:31 pm

soooo.....

Apparently my stupid brain came up with another beginning...

Why, after I posted this on Scholastic? 

I honestly don't know

I might post that beginning if you'd like, its basically another story with the same storyline




 Re: Chapter One of a Fantasy Novel-Please help think of a ti
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Joined: Thu Feb 23, 2017 12:23 am
Posts: 18
Sat Feb 25, 2017 8:05 pm

I'd like to see your new begining. I have my own book going and I changed the begining up a bunch and now it's superior! At least I think so. I'm trying to figure out how to post it. I'm stumped on how to do it though... But I'd definitly like to see the other begining!




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