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 combo of percy jackson, harry potter and twilight. myfavebooksfantasyland; chap. 1
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Joined: Tue Nov 25, 2008 10:01 pm
Posts: 118
Sat Feb 20, 2010 2:06 pm
aliens are real. i am an alien. u r an alien. we r all aliens!!!!!!!! yea!!!!!! sry very very bored. my awful science teacher, miss venodd, was explaining how the paranormal was a hoax. but i know better. my mom, eliana moore, was a witch/ vampire. my father, tristen jackson, was a demigod. (authors note: for those of u who have not read percy jackson, a demigod is a person half human, half greek god.) my grandfather, the esteemed percy jackson, saver of zeus' bolt, had married another demigod, named annabeth, causing my father to be a grandson of both poseidon and athena. my mother however, had distant relations to harry potter and the famous edward cullen. "samantha jackson! sleeping in class again?  another detention, i guess." miss venodd hissed out. a few snickers proceeded from the popular jerks in class. i gave all of them, including miss venodd, my infamous ' ihate u all' stare. my satyr friend, missy, elbowed me, and vigoursly shook her head and mouthed ' calm down'. my vampire friend dylan used his mind control to help carry out missys orders. i slumped back in my seat, wondering what torture was in store for me at detention.



 Re: combo of percy jackson, harry potter and twilight. myfavebooksfantasyland; chap. 1
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Joined: Sun Mar 29, 2009 2:39 am
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Sun Feb 28, 2010 8:02 pm
Really cool. You should check out NaNoWriMo. It would be perfect for you. IK CC!



 Re: combo of percy jackson, harry potter and twilight. myfavebooksfantasyland; chap. 1
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Joined: Sun Jul 12, 2009 1:23 pm
Posts: 315
Mon Mar 01, 2010 7:31 pm
Hahaha! That was funny. A relative of both Edward Cullen and Harry Potter? How ironic!
 
~Addison



 Re: combo of percy jackson, harry potter and twilight. myfavebooksfantasyland; chap. 1
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Joined: Fri Dec 25, 2009 9:19 pm
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Tue Mar 30, 2010 12:16 pm
pretty good the first few lines don't really make sense tho wait! wait no dad don't take me away from the computer sry hav to go dad taking me off good job
 



 Re: combo of Percy Jackson, harry potter and twilight. myfavebooksfantasyland; chap. 1
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Joined: Sat Oct 17, 2009 3:27 pm
Posts: 829
Sun May 09, 2010 5:34 pm
that is sooooo cool those are the three series I am currently immersed in
 
BTW YOU NEED TO WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER OF THE DIERY OF GOD IT WAS SOOOO COOL
 
BTWA can you pleas read Ember part one and tell me what you think? I would be really grateful
 
greentea1398
 
"Imagination is more important that knowledge."
- Albert Einstein
 
"Sweet mother of Abraham Lincoln, the prospector he'll wanna meet ya!" 
-My animated name sake Jessie from toy story 2
 
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 Re: combo of percy jackson, harry potter and twilight. myfavebooksfantasyland; chap. 1
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Joined: Tue Nov 16, 2010 7:59 pm
Posts: 95
Wed Nov 17, 2010 8:19 pm
WRITE MORE! It was really good! Could you read mine? It's called The Killers (not nearly as bad as it sounds tho lol!)



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