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 Comedy club

Joined: Sun Jun 14, 2015 11:12 pm
Posts: 8
Thu Jul 30, 2015 1:03 pm

Hey guys, such a great audience here today, how yall doing? Anyway, I;m here to supposedly make you laugh, here i go. Have you ever been watching disney XD, or cartoon network,  and a commercial for a back brace comes on? Its not like old people even wath those shows, kids don't go up to there parents and be like "mommy, mommy, I want a back brac, I saw one on tv, it looked so cool, I WANT IT MOMMY!"  Seriously. I have this friend she doesn't have a phone but she does have an app where she can call people, she has crtain rigtones for ceartain people, like her mom is a fire alarm. " Oh NO! My mom is calling SHHHHH! Oh wait, its not my mom, the building caugt on fire, silly me."  Her dad s a dog. "OMG A DOG IS RUNNING AFTER ME, AHHHHHHHHH!!!!, oh wait, just my dad,sorry.  how ya liked it?

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