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 Days of Jude- prologue
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Thu Oct 07, 2010 2:04 pm

Chase ran, concealing the young boy in her cloak. She looked at him- it, she corrected herself. Still, she felt her heart soften as she looked at the babe. He had raven-black hair, just beginning to fall softly into his eyes- those indescribably blue eyes. They were old eyes- eyes that knew something. Eyes that stared into your soul. Chase shivered. That boy would be something, that was for sure.

 

If he survived.


I know it's short, but it gets better.




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