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 doom tunnel-chapter 6
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Joined: Sun Oct 11, 2009 8:33 am
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Sat Feb 20, 2010 5:26 pm

I knew who he was. He was the chosen one. I can't believe I'm actually started to talk to him! This is amazing!

 

 

 

i know-its short




 Re: doom tunnel-chapter 6
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Sun Mar 07, 2010 7:25 pm
 bekah159 wrote:
i know-its short


   I think maybe too short for a chapter. You should've just tacked this onto the last chapter. Oh well...Loved the other chapter though!
                              -Teresa



 Re: doom tunnel-chapter 6
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Joined: Mon Jun 11, 2007 12:51 pm
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Sun Aug 01, 2010 12:25 pm
Definitely too short...and where'd this chosen one thing come from? Still, it's pretty intruiging.
 
Lonely was the song I sang
Til the day
you came
Showing me another way

And all that my love can bring
 
Kira



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