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 Enberasment Chapter 1

Joined: Mon May 16, 2016 8:44 pm
Posts: 7
Thu May 19, 2016 9:34 pm

Hi I am in the 3rd grade, my fav color is pink, and I love writing. Anyway heres my story

Chapter 1 

Okay this is the most enberasing day of my life. I enberased myself infrount of my crush Arky. We were in class  today when I THREW UP ON THE TEATCHERS DESK, and yes I did do it I also THREW UP ON ARKY. I know Arky likes throw up but still. Hey if you were in my shoes you would feel the same way.blush

 Re: Enberasment Chapter 1

Joined: Thu May 12, 2016 5:38 pm
Posts: 116
Sun May 29, 2016 12:03 am

LOL! Write chapter 2 soon! And Arky kinda sounds like a wired guy.....(but aren't all boys a little wired in some ways? winkcheeky) ~Hayley

 Re: Enberasment Chapter 1

Joined: Wed May 11, 2016 8:01 pm
Posts: 270
Mon Jun 06, 2016 5:15 am

So...what else? It's an okay start, but what else?


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