Post Work in Progress for Peer Review


Welcome to Write It, the home for young writers. Post your works-in-progress and get feedback or give your opinion on your peers’ creative writing. Try a step-by-step writing workshop, then publish your writing online.

You’ve probably noticed we’ve made some changes to the boards! Find the boards for Underground Railroad historical fiction, Science Explorations, Scholastic News, and more right here.

Looking for our boards dedicated to favorite series, authors, and causes? You'll find them on THE STACKS. Head on over for the Buzz Board, Harry Potter, Save the Planet, Goosebumps, and more!
   [ 1 post ] Average score:  
Author Message
 Enchanted Dazzlers Fight [Weekly Find out!]

Joined: Wed Mar 30, 2016 9:09 pm
Posts: 1
Wed Mar 30, 2016 9:32 pm

     Queen Dazzler looked high over clouds and waited. She watched as a girl sang a small song that whispered among the trees. She knew that this was her daughter. She told her "Beware your sister and you will always be safe." Then she turned to her son andl him "You a well." Then she entered the DazzlerTree and willed herself to not cry. Then she said "Farewell Children!" Then entered.      broken heart   

Display posts from previous:  Sort by  
   [ 1 post ] Average score:  

PRS © 2008 PRS Team