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 Ever Lasting, hope you like!

Joined: Fri Jan 02, 2015 9:59 pm
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Sun Jan 11, 2015 4:23 am

   i  hope to make a series called Ever Lasting, and here is book one, ​Forgotten Spirits

.                                                                  Prologue.      

 Peril. Fear. Prophecies. Many millennia ago, Pyro was at peace. When the Devil had taken the world into his fists. It was said that a group of seven mystical students would free them all from loss, destruction, and slavery. It was said that they would create order from chaos. Everyone and everything had put hope to those words, but those words were soon forgotten by all but the Elders. The Elders searched for the generation of mystical with the blood of both a fallen angel and dark elf. Millennium of battles with victories and hope to heartbreaking loss. The inheritance to the Creators were soon to be at war with the Devil himself. The Devil himself who feared the rebellious Forgotten Spirits. The seven soon found themselves at the Academy of Mysticals and learned to control all as their forgotten life slowly comes to reveal itself.

Hope you like it!             Wolfwild  or   Dragonangel1685

 Re: Ever Lasting, hope you like!

Joined: Wed May 11, 2016 8:01 pm
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Thu May 12, 2016 7:37 pm

I like it. You should post more.

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