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 Family

Joined: Mon Dec 05, 2011 12:40 am
Posts: 21
Mon Feb 27, 2012 11:25 am

A family's more special than diamonds or jewels

or money or treasures galore

It's power,warmth and comfort

is something that's not sold in stores

U share love with yr family

They're people around u tat care

And everyday,from morning to night

Yr family will always be there.heart




 Re: Family

Joined: Mon Dec 05, 2011 12:40 am
Posts: 21
Sat Mar 17, 2012 12:05 pm

Somebody reply pls.....And go look at my other poems:On Crushes&On Friends.....thks!!!!!smiley& reply pls^^




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Joined: Tue Apr 24, 2012 9:20 pm
Posts: 26
Sat May 05, 2012 12:35 am
my family is breaking apart: sister in the marines in October,dad that's only here so the family won't fall off its hinges,brother with ADHD,Autisim and a shunt ,a mother trying to keep it together (with the cigarettes she dosn't know that i know about) and me a diabetic who has know idea how a 11 year old should be,trying to keep it together while still being at the top of my class,trying to still have friends , meanwhile all around me all these PERFECT familys with their PERFECT kids walk by my life that some times feels like i'm in a dream. family is great like you said except when it is falling apart like mine



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Joined: Tue Apr 24, 2012 9:20 pm
Posts: 26
Sat May 26, 2012 10:35 pm
by the way i hope no one thinks i dont love my family 'cause i reallllllllllllllllllllllllllydo!



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Joined: Thu May 17, 2012 12:46 am
Posts: 6
Wed May 30, 2012 2:15 pm
family is one of the best things that has ever happened to me!! so is the person that wrote this poem! They inspire me to love my family more!



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Joined: Wed Dec 26, 2012 10:08 pm
Posts: 9
Sat Dec 29, 2012 11:59 pm
Hello, it was me that wrote that poem and i hope you liked it, and dancingunicorn31 i now that you said that your family is breaking apart just pray and become a leader and follow god and be one of his people who help others to follow god and i now you said that your mom somkehave a family metting and talk about that and you need to start praying, and coachpsyched2 i now you said that your family is the best thing that ever happened to you and you should love your family like, anuts , counsin. father, mother, everybody in the world is your brother and sister and you great grandparnets are adam and eve. okay bye god bless you, From , Uwhomano



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Joined: Fri May 03, 2013 12:16 pm
Posts: 4
Thu May 23, 2013 10:00 pm
Cuteeeeee! Lived it!



 Re: Family
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Joined: Wed May 29, 2013 11:28 pm
Posts: 404
Tue Jun 18, 2013 8:23 pm
Great Poem! I loved it! :)



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Joined: Sat May 10, 2014 1:43 am
Posts: 4
Fri May 23, 2014 6:28 pm

Love what you cant get in stores.... families! cherish yours becouse you dont know how long you got.Or how long they got. Families are forever!




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Joined: Fri May 30, 2014 3:23 am
Posts: 4
Sun Jun 29, 2014 12:15 am

wow thats really sweet of you to write about your family.




 Re: Family
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Joined: Wed Feb 11, 2015 6:52 pm
Posts: 24
Wed Mar 11, 2015 4:33 pm

i don't have a family.




 Re: Family
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Joined: Wed Feb 11, 2015 6:52 pm
Posts: 24
Wed Mar 18, 2015 5:37 pm

your family loves you. you know. they will always.

catchingpizza60.

 




 Re: Family
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Joined: Wed Feb 11, 2015 6:52 pm
Posts: 24
Wed Apr 15, 2015 5:43 pm

joy it while you can because you have a family and i don't have a family......

so when i get a family i will let you guys and girls know.




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