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 for only him.

Joined: Tue Oct 25, 2011 3:47 pm
Posts: 144
Tue Mar 06, 2012 9:45 pm

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i swear, you will love this poem.

For only him.

underneath the stormy skies,

noone heard the absent cry.

the sound that represnts a pause,

a silent breaking of the laws.

a phonomenon seen from within,

becouse it happened for only hin.

his heart skiped a beat,

and so did the clock.

it seemed like everything had stoped.

as time continued at a normal pace,

something happened between time and space.

it was not fast,

it was not slow,

becouse it was not contained between time and flow.

a phonomenon seen from within,

becuose it happened for only him.

noone else knows what happened within,

becouse time had stoped,

for only him.

so, what do you think?

-Milo Xyloto




 Re: for only him.

Joined: Mon Dec 05, 2011 12:40 am
Posts: 21
Fri Mar 16, 2012 8:19 am

WOW u mean u wrote it?????surpriseIt is real nice.yesGREAT!!!!!i mean wow i m seriously amaze!!!!!i rated it 5/5.btw pls go look at my poems On Crushes,Family&On Friends...thks!!!!!smiley




 Re: for only him.

Joined: Tue Apr 26, 2011 2:36 pm
Posts: 18
Thu Mar 22, 2012 5:01 pm

omg such a pretty poem!! ~heart  wink




 Re: for only him.

Joined: Sat Oct 15, 2011 10:16 am
Posts: 3
Thu Mar 22, 2012 9:30 pm

underneath the stormy skies?

i know that you're a Coldplay fan, but that's over the top!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

i love over the top!

-Indigo C. W. Scarlet




 Re: for only him.
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Joined: Thu May 17, 2012 12:46 am
Posts: 6
Wed May 30, 2012 2:20 pm
That was the prettiest poem I had ever heard!! It inspired me to wan to write some more in my notebook!!!!! :p



 Re: for only him.
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Joined: Wed Dec 26, 2012 10:08 pm
Posts: 9
Sun Dec 30, 2012 12:04 am
thanks guys, it took an hour to figure out the poem it is by god's grace that poem was sent to you. i love god he is king of all king lord of all lord god of our parsie you are my song i prasie you with every breathe thank you i sing lots of christain and gospel song i play piano to and i allso sing i have a voice of a angel and i sing gospel and hip hop gospel song (...). And god will bless you all merry xmas. From, Uwhomano



 Re: for only him.
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Joined: Thu May 23, 2013 2:10 pm
Posts: 2
Thu May 23, 2013 2:25 pm
awesome poem !!s really neat btw I rate it 10 !! :)



 Re: for only him.

Joined: Tue Dec 28, 2010 10:15 pm
Posts: 7
Thu Nov 07, 2013 3:48 am
That was amazing! Your words were really powerful and left an impression on me. Check out some of my work if you can, please. -Frenchdonut-



 Re: for only him.
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Joined: Thu Mar 07, 2013 7:01 pm
Posts: 63
Tue Jan 07, 2014 5:50 pm
OMG! love it you should keep writing -nice job adorablebrain54



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