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 Funny HARRY POTTER Short Story
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Joined: Tue Jun 21, 2016 12:07 am
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Fri Jun 24, 2016 5:02 pm

Today was the day. The day I'd been waiting for since I saw Xander walk through a solid brick wall. When my name was called, I timidly crept up to the Sorting Hat. I needed to get Gryffindor, I just needed to. I put it on and was encased in darkness. As the strange hat analyzed every thought and feeling, I tensed up. The hat had finally come to a decision. As it cleared his throat, I screamed in agony as it called "Slyther--Gryffindor!" Wow, Sorting Hat. Amazing sense of humor. I can't believe--"Wait Hufflepuff! No, Slytherin!" Now, everyone was confused. "Uh... District 12! Candor! Divergent!" What the... "Hmm... Why not Ravenclaw." Everyone clapped, but it might have just been a slow clap for the Hat.

 

This is my first story not in the Fan Fiction column so... wish me luck, I guess. I know this is Harry Potter themed, but I feel like it belongs more in the Humor section than the Fan Fiction section. If you want to see some more serious writing, check out my Fan Fiction Odd Occurances. (It's way better than this, trust me) I don't want to be one of those people always try to strive for attention, but my Fan Fiction has been around for a bit and there are not many replies or anything, last time I checked. Sorry for that note, please go on with your day...




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