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 FUNNY PARODY OF JUSTIN BEIBER'S "BABY"
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Joined: Wed Jan 26, 2011 5:36 pm
Posts: 128
Thu Sep 01, 2011 4:17 pm
I ha-ate babies.
Babies sti-inkk.
They may be cute,
But they're annoying.
 
They only sleep.
They only cry.
They only eat,
Oh, and they whine.
 
I hate their diapers,
I hate their pooping,
I hate their pee.
Yeah, babies hate me.
 
Then i was like, baby, baby, baby, Nooooooo!!!!
Baby, baby, baby, Nooooo!!!!!
You ruined my favorite shirt, shirt.
 
 
 
for the record, i dont hate babies, it just went with the song. tell me if i should do more parodys.

Message Edited by Write_It_Moderator on 09-04-2011 07:38 AM




 Re: FUNNY PARODY OF JUSTIN BEIBER'S "BABY"
regular_visitor

Joined: Wed Jan 26, 2011 5:36 pm
Posts: 128
Sun Nov 06, 2011 5:42 pm
dream of him getting attacked because you don't like him? yeah. he's kinda overrated.
 
 

“Today is when your book begins. The rest is still unwritten.”

lNatasha Bedingfield l

 



 Re: FUNNY PARODY OF JUSTIN BEIBER'S "BABY"
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Joined: Fri Dec 30, 2011 1:40 am
Posts: 15
Fri Feb 10, 2012 8:39 pm

lil kim

I like justin. dont be mean or else im reporting




 Re: FUNNY PARODY OF JUSTIN BEIBER'S "BABY"
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Joined: Mon Mar 05, 2012 10:14 pm
Posts: 4
Wed Mar 14, 2012 12:26 pm

That is so funny i can't stop loling!!! I don't like him at all!!!laugh




 Re: FUNNY PARODY OF JUSTIN BEIBER'S "BABY"
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Joined: Wed Mar 28, 2012 8:06 pm
Posts: 3
Wed Mar 28, 2012 8:14 pm

thats so funny




 Re: FUNNY PARODY OF JUSTIN BEIBER'S "BABY"
visitor

Joined: Thu Dec 31, 2009 4:39 pm
Posts: 87
Mon Apr 23, 2012 10:13 pm
I have another parody, I know your plastic, you are not real, stop staring at me!, I'm not a meal, I'm just a kid, with a piggy bank, I have a huge bag full of rice, I have a future, so please don't eat me!, I'm really hot, so I made some tea, I'm really scared but I shouldn't be, Cause, your just a baby, baby, baby doll, a baby, baby, baby doll! Your just a piece of plastic, and you creep me out like the sham wow guy! (repeat to heart's content!)



 Re: FUNNY PARODY OF JUSTIN BEIBER'S "BABY"
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Joined: Sat Apr 28, 2012 6:52 pm
Posts: 2
Sat Apr 28, 2012 10:50 pm
I do not like justin beiber at all .



 Re: FUNNY PARODY OF JUSTIN BEIBER'S "BABY"
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Joined: Thu Mar 01, 2012 9:45 pm
Posts: 29
Thu May 03, 2012 12:06 am
amen! finaly! at first i thought every one was brain-washed by Justin LaFever (as my friends and i call him).i hope you do more parodys!-Arty Blue



 Re: FUNNY PARODY OF JUSTIN BEIBER'S "BABY"
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Joined: Thu May 03, 2012 10:46 am
Posts: 1
Thu May 03, 2012 11:07 am
it seems cool so i like it anyway do more



 Re: FUNNY PARODY OF JUSTIN BEIBER'S "BABY"
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Joined: Sun Apr 15, 2012 11:52 am
Posts: 3
Fri May 11, 2012 8:14 pm
my shirt i-was white. now it is yellow



 Re: FUNNY PARODY OF JUSTIN BEIBER'S "BABY"
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Joined: Sun Apr 08, 2012 11:02 am
Posts: 6
Fri May 18, 2012 1:16 pm
Please tell me, what is so bad about Justin Bieber? He's got so many fans, his videos have millions of views, girls practically everywhere have crushes on him. Don't be mean about this guy, ok? I don't love Justin, but I still think his songs are nice, ok? So don't be so mean. How'd you like it if he did this to you?



 Re: FUNNY PARODY OF JUSTIN BEIBER'S "BABY"
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Joined: Tue Jul 19, 2011 7:58 pm
Posts: 1387
Sun May 20, 2012 7:41 pm
@Dawndrama--- It's a joke. Chill. Besides, Lil' Kim is a girl, and she doesn't have a crush on him. ~Jared



 Re: FUNNY PARODY OF JUSTIN BEIBER'S "BABY"
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Joined: Sat May 12, 2012 10:35 pm
Posts: 1
Fri May 25, 2012 9:16 pm
hey guys don't be mean to poor Justin, he has long ways to go but don't BE MEAN, that just plain dumb to say i don't like him at al,l wow what are you guys thinking, i think Justin want to have fun, wont you to if you famous,yeah that what i though BE nice



 Re: FUNNY PARODY OF JUSTIN BEIBER'S "BABY"
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Joined: Fri Jun 01, 2012 2:13 am
Posts: 10
Fri Jun 01, 2012 2:40 am

LOL!!!! Love the song and I love babies!!!!! Thing is I don't like JB!! Sorry!!! Have to dissagree on that, but the poem was great.!! :) 




 Re: FUNNY PARODY OF JUSTIN BEIBER'S "BABY"
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Joined: Tue May 29, 2012 2:53 pm
Posts: 1
Mon Jun 18, 2012 10:40 pm
baby



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Joined: Sat Nov 12, 2011 3:11 pm
Posts: 505
Sat Jun 30, 2012 4:32 am
That's so funny!!



 Re: FUNNY PARODY OF JUSTIN BEIBER'S "BABY"
visitor

Joined: Sun May 02, 2010 3:54 pm
Posts: 58
Tue Jul 24, 2012 7:09 pm
1)I don't like Justin Bieber. At least not the songs; "baby, baby"? Honestly, he just repeats those words over and over. 2)Selena Gomez could do better. 3)Great parody 4)Everyone, it's a JOKE! Not everyone likes him or his type of music, be it context, content, or anything else. Not every girl, or boy for that matter, in the world, likes Justin Bieber.We're free to state our opinions.



 Re: FUNNY PARODY OF JUSTIN BEIBER'S "BABY"
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Joined: Mon May 07, 2012 8:04 pm
Posts: 41
Thu Jul 26, 2012 5:51 pm
I love it! I don't like justin at all.



 Re: FUNNY PARODY OF JUSTIN BEIBER'S "BABY"

Joined: Sun Nov 20, 2011 5:57 pm
Posts: 110
Fri Aug 17, 2012 9:54 am
HEY! I don't have any thing against Justin Bieber but still....LOL!



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