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 Funny stuff or so i think...READ NOW OR ELSE...

Joined: Sun Jun 06, 2010 1:07 pm
Posts: 8
Sun Jun 06, 2010 1:50 pm
Randa:Hey dudes what are we gonna do today?!?!?!?!
Frank:Settle down (Tackles Randa because she was running in circules clapping her hands.)
Cora (tackles frank: GET OFF HER!
Frank: Cora what the...
Cora (tries to stuff a sock in his mouth):GET IN THERE!
Randa: Hey guys why cant we all just be happy?
Chase (who has just walked into the park):Umm what are we doin?
Frank: Get out of here while you can!!
Chase: That was easy. (takes cora and sets her on the swings.)
Randa (squels): Puppy dowg!
Random person: Get away! get away!!!!!
Dog: Get off of me earth burger!
Chase:Okay i didnt expect that.
Dog (bites Randa):MWAHAHAHAHA DOGS RULE PEOPLE DROOL WE SHALL TAKE OVER!!
(A jetpack sprouts out of the dogs back)
Randa: Hey guys i dont feel so good (Falls over)
Cora (who has just noticed whats going on):Woah look at that wierd cloud.(pionts at the dog.)
           if you want to see more give me a positive shoutout! i know its not funny really.
 oh and uh this is my other account xXFireInTheSkyXx just wanted u to know
CLAPTON 4EVER!!
                    your friend,
                          EricClapton1Fan



 Re: Funny stuff or so i think...READ NOW OR ELSE...
visitor

Joined: Fri Jun 11, 2010 9:25 pm
Posts: 48
Fri Jul 09, 2010 4:18 pm
huh? weird, but it was cute!(:

Rissa<3




 Re: Funny stuff or so i think...READ NOW OR ELSE...
frequent_vsitor

Joined: Sat Feb 06, 2010 1:58 am
Posts: 319
Sat Jul 10, 2010 1:03 am
LOL FINALLY SOME RANDOM STUFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:smileyvery-happy:



 Re: Funny stuff or so i think...READ NOW OR ELSE...
regular_visitor

Joined: Sun Mar 14, 2010 11:57 am
Posts: 229
Sun Aug 08, 2010 2:18 pm
Try writing in a smaller font size. It was really hard to read.



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