Post Work in Progress for Peer Review


Welcome to Write It, the home for young writers. Post your works-in-progress and get feedback or give your opinion on your peers’ creative writing. Try a step-by-step writing workshop, then publish your writing online.

You’ve probably noticed we’ve made some changes to the boards! Find the boards for Underground Railroad historical fiction, Science Explorations, Scholastic News, and more right here.

Looking for our boards dedicated to favorite series, authors, and causes? You'll find them on THE STACKS. Head on over for the Buzz Board, Harry Potter, Save the Planet, Goosebumps, and more!
   [ 7 posts ] Average score:  
Author Message
 Funny things etc.

Joined: Fri Nov 27, 2009 12:18 am
Posts: 4398
Fri Dec 24, 2010 10:20 pm
My funny (to me) S&R (statement and response). Enjoy! (Or not :D)

Tuning boring school facts into something to laugh about:

S: Did you know the most common fear is arachnophobia?
R: But I like raccoons!

Correcting Christmas Carols:

S: Remember, we bring him silver and gold. Not the opposite.
R: Oh. Okay.

*Setting the scene: Two kids in goggles and lab aprons about to do a lab*
Just Pretending:

S: Ugh. I hate these goggles!
R: My scalpel please doctor. 

Two meanings:

S: Did you know there are two meanings of darn? One means to mend, do you know the other one?
R: Of course! To darn is to dang.

Just being random:

S: Hamsters scare me.
R: That reminds me... The Hamster Dance.... De de de di de de do do, da da de di de de dooooo!

Message Edited by _pinksummer2313_ on 03-24-2011 10:49 PM

 Re: Funny things etc.

Joined: Thu Apr 09, 2009 4:15 pm
Posts: 77
Fri Jun 17, 2011 8:48 pm

 Re: Funny things etc.

Joined: Mon Sep 24, 2012 9:03 pm
Posts: 2
Sat Sep 29, 2012 7:22 pm
Hi! My name is Aravelle. I read your message. Have you heard the joke: Why did the dinosaur cross the road? Well, the answer is, because chickens were not invented yet!

 Re: Funny things etc.

Joined: Fri Feb 24, 2012 9:36 pm
Posts: 18
Fri Nov 16, 2012 10:55 pm
hey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! will you send ma a shout out????????? i read your post and would like to be your friend so please request!!!! thx 0:) dragondragon505!

 Re: Funny things etc.

Joined: Sat Dec 17, 2011 2:05 pm
Posts: 22
Thu Jan 17, 2013 2:19 am
the hamster dance is epic.

 Re: Funny things etc.

Joined: Mon Mar 25, 2013 1:44 pm
Posts: 82
Mon Mar 25, 2013 5:29 pm
Think of stuff that is funny to everyone( girls+boys, adults+ kids and so on)!

 Re: Funny things etc.

Joined: Mon May 13, 2013 2:19 pm
Posts: 4
Thu Jul 04, 2013 6:56 pm
random turtle

Display posts from previous:  Sort by  
   [ 7 posts ] Average score:  

PRS © 2008 PRS Team