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 funny vampires
visitor

Joined: Thu Apr 09, 2009 4:15 pm
Posts: 77
Fri Jun 17, 2011 7:39 pm
BELLA, YOU KNOW I'M A VAMPIRE. AND MY BROTHER IS ON SESAME STREET HE COUNTS LIKE THIS. 1 COOKIE, 2 COOKIE, 3 COOKIE, AHAHAH. BUT I WANNA SHOW YOU SOMTHING.
 
WHAT IS IT EDWARD?! :robotmad:
 
STEP INTO THE LIGHT IN THE MEDDOW WITH ME
 
EDWARD! YOUR SKIN! Y DOS IT SPARKLE?
 
BCUZ ITZ MADE GLITTER AND......... I'M HALF FAIRY! TEEEHEEEEHEEEEHEEEE
 
 
 
 
sOrrY 2 aLl U eDWaRd FaNs  TEAM JACOB!



 Re: funny vampires

Joined: Tue Jun 21, 2011 12:45 pm
Posts: 7
Mon Jun 27, 2011 12:58 pm
not to be mean but edward stinks jacob rules:smileyhappy:

Message Edited by Write_It_Moderator on 06-28-2011 06:27 PM




 Re: funny vampires
frequent_vsitor

Joined: Fri Dec 25, 2009 9:19 pm
Posts: 452
Mon Jun 27, 2011 8:15 pm
yeah! Team Jacob all the way! Edward is creepy!



 Re: funny vampires
visitor

Joined: Thu Apr 09, 2009 4:15 pm
Posts: 77
Fri Jul 01, 2011 9:51 pm
I agree that Jacob rules thats why I made fun of Edward!



 Re: funny vampires
rookie_visitor

Joined: Thu Aug 04, 2011 2:42 pm
Posts: 6
Fri Aug 19, 2011 1:39 pm
OMG!!!!! that was so funny my mom is team edward wait till I show this to my mom :smileyvery-happy:


_racergirl23_ wrote:
BELLA, YOU KNOW I'M A VAMPIRE. AND MY BROTHER IS ON SESAME STREET HE COUNTS LIKE THIS. 1 COOKIE, 2 COOKIE, 3 COOKIE, AHAHAH. BUT I WANNA SHOW YOU SOMTHING.
 
WHAT IS IT EDWARD?! :robotmad:
 
STEP INTO THE LIGHT IN THE MEDDOW WITH ME
 
EDWARD! YOUR SKIN! Y DOS IT SPARKLE?
 
BCUZ ITZ MADE GLITTER AND......... I'M HALF FAIRY! TEEEHEEEEHEEEEHEEEE
 
And I just love running in the flowery medows with u bella I want to be with u   Belz please take this ring and promise me you will b a fairy with me !        sOrrY 2 aLl U eDWaRd FaNs  TEAM JACOB! To Be continued... with edward deressed as a fairy in tights!:)  TEAM JACOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


OH I added some parts:)



 Re: funny vampires
rookie_visitor

Joined: Thu Aug 04, 2011 2:42 pm
Posts: 6
Fri Aug 19, 2011 1:40 pm
REALLY Edward is creepy THATS  true!



 Re: funny vampires
rookie_visitor

Joined: Thu Aug 04, 2011 2:42 pm
Posts: 6
Fri Aug 19, 2011 1:41 pm
Gosh when u made fun of him I almost started crying it was so good!oh I added to it!



 Re: funny vampires
visitor

Joined: Thu Apr 09, 2009 4:15 pm
Posts: 77
Tue Oct 04, 2011 7:29 pm
even funnier thn wht I wrote! lets keep adding more!



 Re: funny vampires

Joined: Tue Nov 29, 2011 5:57 pm
Posts: 3
Thu Dec 08, 2011 5:53 pm
funny



 Re: funny vampires

Joined: Fri Jul 30, 2010 4:03 pm
Posts: 2
Sun Feb 05, 2012 5:09 pm

Jacob is so HOTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!heartcheeky




 Re: funny vampires

Joined: Fri Jul 30, 2010 4:03 pm
Posts: 2
Sun Feb 05, 2012 5:12 pm

He is very Creepy!!!!!!!! surprise




 Re: funny vampires
visitor

Joined: Tue Dec 06, 2011 7:58 pm
Posts: 78
Sun Feb 19, 2012 7:41 pm

GO JACOB!

Did you see Lautner's latest movie,Abduction? It was AWESOME!




 Re: funny vampires
new

Joined: Tue Mar 20, 2012 3:08 pm
Posts: 1
Tue Mar 20, 2012 3:45 pm

coolsmiley




 Re: funny vampires
new

Joined: Thu Apr 12, 2012 4:55 pm
Posts: 5
Fri Apr 13, 2012 2:20 am

LOL

cheeky

TEAM   JACOB 




 Re: funny vampires
rookie_visitor

Joined: Thu Jul 21, 2011 2:18 am
Posts: 100
Wed May 02, 2012 3:54 am
thats funny



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