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Tue Jan 12, 2016 3:49 am

Laughing, barking.

Running bounding.

Playing, with my dog.

 

But I can't, not anymore.

 

She was old, it was "her time."

That doesn't make it any easier.

 

I watched, as the light went out of her eyes.

"Molly?" I asked, but it was in vain.

She was gone, never coming back.

 

Never again will we play, old friend.

Never again will I see your fluffy face.

You're gone, gone for good.

 

(I know I make it seem like putting a pet down is horrible, but Molly was old and sick. It really is better for the animals.)

 



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