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 Grenade by Bruno Mars

Joined: Tue Mar 30, 2010 5:51 pm
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Mon Jan 03, 2011 7:47 pm
              This is my lame attempt at trying to be a journalist. EPIC FAIL!!!!
 I listened to the song Grenade by Bruno Mars. The song has a deep meaning to it. I loved the way Bruno Mars portrayed everything, the way he showed how beaten he was about the relationship.
  Mars was in an abusive relationship, and did nothing about it. I guess in the end, he realized that he couldn't do anything for his girlfriend, and eventually gave up on her.
  "Black, black, black and blue. Beat me 'til I'm numb. tell the devil I said hey when you get back to where your from." This is probably the deepest line in all of the song. It is one of my personal favorites, and describes the relationship perfectly. This is a sign that this is not a good relationship.
  This song could possibly be the sequal of his other hit "Just the Way You Are." It could possibly be the same girl he is talking about, just in a different perspective.
   Will there be another song spinoff? Maybe. Maybe not. I guess we will have to just wait and see.

 Re: Grenade by Bruno Mars

Joined: Sun Apr 10, 2011 6:31 pm
Posts: 7
Sun Apr 10, 2011 7:21 pm
girl i know wat u mean!!

 Re: Grenade by Bruno Mars

Joined: Mon Jun 11, 2007 12:51 pm
Posts: 7835
Tue Jun 14, 2011 12:33 pm
Nice. I love that song!
Music is love in search of a Word.

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