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Joined: Thu Jan 01, 1970 12:00 am
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Sat Apr 01, 2017 12:18 am

I walk up, nervous to speak.

She is laughing, talking with all her friends.

I tap her on the shoulder.

She turns, seemingly in slow motion.

I open my mouth, but no words come out,

So I say one simple word,

" Hello." 




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