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 Here is a poem I wrote today a few minuets ago
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Joined: Sat Dec 12, 2015 1:21 am
Posts: 13
Sun Mar 20, 2016 3:17 am

Hey guys I'm new it would make my day if you would follow me(that's not the poem

Trapped

 
I feel like the ways are closing in on me.
I’m trapped.
I feel like I’m suffocating.
I’m trapped.
I can’t breathe.
I’m trapped.
Depression is trapping me. 
I feel lost.
I feel insecure.
I feel like I’m in a deep hole.
I feel trapped.
Why can’t I find a way to breakthrough.
Why am I trapped.
The reason is from others.
 
-wolfteal419
 



 Re: Here is a poem I wrote today a few minuets ago
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Joined: Tue Mar 22, 2016 6:15 pm
Posts: 1
Wed Mar 23, 2016 5:58 pm

this is really good




 Re: Here is a poem I wrote today a few minuets ago
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Joined: Sat Nov 08, 2014 11:05 pm
Posts: 66
Fri Mar 25, 2016 5:04 pm
Wow, that's a good poem. I wrote one myself, here it is : Oh Caterpillar Oh Caterpillar come to me, oh caterpillar What are you gonna be? You curl up In your Warm cocoon, I really hope you come out Soon. It's been a few long months now, I Crawling on the ground. But when I find that You're not there, I look up to find you flying In the air!



 Re: Here is a poem I wrote today a few minuets ago
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Joined: Sat Feb 27, 2016 3:10 pm
Posts: 68
Fri Mar 25, 2016 7:40 pm

Nice poem Wolfteal419! I got gosbumps because of it!!!!!!!!!!!! keep on writing wink! Good luck!!!!!!!!!!




 Re: Here is a poem I wrote today a few minuets ago
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Joined: Sat Dec 12, 2015 1:21 am
Posts: 13
Sat Apr 09, 2016 11:19 pm

I have 2 others other than Trapped,Faithful,and Friends

One is called love which is really long i mean it's super long and another one which is one of the shorterst i've written called hope




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