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 hey guys I'm writing a book plz read! by catblue6759
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                           Back cover

Me: “NO! Get outta me!”

Him: You’re almost dead anyway what have you got to lose?

Me: “I don’t want you in me!”

Him: “Comon, it’ll be fun AND I can save you from death himself.

Me: “Fine!”

Then I let go.

 

  Kitana Jones goes to school on Friday the thirteenth, 2017, only to be attacked by a man named Scorpio. She almost dies, but a ghost named Jeremy Cypris saves her. They then make an agreement. Will Kitana and Jeremy defeat Scorpio? Read the book to find out!

          



 Re: hey guys I'm writing a book plz read! by catblue6759
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Thu May 12, 2016 5:34 am

I really like the idea. The back cover could (emphasis on could, you do not have to do this if you don't want to) be simplified to this:

Me: "Get out of me!"

Him: "What for? You're almost dead anyway. What have you got to lose?"

Me: "I want you away from me, let alone in me!"

Him: Come on. It'll be fun. Who knows? Maybe you'll have the time of your life." Thinks for a moment. "And...I can save you from death itself."

Me: I hesitated. To reject it would get this person out of my body. But yet again, I could be letting go of the finest opportunity. To be spared from death itself...

I finally managed to choke out a hesitant word. "Fine!"

Then I let go.




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