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 Hope
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Mon Feb 20, 2017 2:13 am

The year was 1876. I was currently chasing after William, my little brother. Then all of a sudden, I heard a KA-BOOM! I turned to look at th sky. Not only was it dark gray,but a huge twter wascomg! ''William!'' I shouted. ''Come back here! There`s a twister coming and we need to get back home!'' William turned and ran to me, but it was too late to go back home. We needed to take cover, and we needed to do it now.

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Please tell me what you think! I`m thinking of doing a Part 2!smiley




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