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 I haven't wrote a song in awhile. So, here's The Best Of Me
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Joined: Sun Jul 10, 2011 6:08 pm
Posts: 165
Sat Mar 03, 2012 1:51 am

The Best Of Me

Seems like there's always a barrier

A growing excuse to go

Seems like there's always a carrier

Of rudeness, disgust, a no-go on the show

 

You're always attacking me

Seems there's no life as it should be

Another empty road, I feel like a tree stripped of it's leaves

But you're not taking the rest of me

No, you haven't seen the best of me

 

Seems like there's always a sneer

A growing thought of betterness

Seems like there's alwas the smear of a tear

Of your sadness, like you're sad, just the beginning of the show

 

~Repeat chorus~

 

Overrated, jaded, washed-up, midbehaved

I'm sick of your games

The games that you play

 

~Repeat chorus x2~

 

So, yeh. I'm still alive. x] Just haven't had time to post to you guys! Dx So sad.

 

~IsisLovesCupcakes(;~

 

 

 




 Re: I haven't wrote a song in awhile. So, here's The Best Of
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Joined: Sat Mar 03, 2012 8:53 pm
Posts: 7
Sun Apr 01, 2012 6:40 pm
i love your song it is awesome. trust me . here is one of mysongs. all u gotta do is dance dance dance dance dance! sorry that's just the chorus.



 Re: I haven't wrote a song in awhile. So, here's The Best Of
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Joined: Sun Apr 08, 2012 11:02 am
Posts: 6
Fri May 18, 2012 1:07 pm
Excuse me for asking, but what exactly is the chorus? Sorry, I'm just trying really hard to figure it out, but I don't know what it is. Thank you!



 Re: I haven't wrote a song in awhile. So, here's The Best Of
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Joined: Sun May 20, 2012 6:20 pm
Posts: 1
Wed May 23, 2012 3:24 am
This is an amazing song! It reminds me of one of my songs, Against Myself, though.



 Re: I haven't wrote a song in awhile. So, here's The Best Of

Joined: Tue Oct 25, 2011 3:47 pm
Posts: 144
Wed Jun 06, 2012 10:11 pm
wow!
did you realy write that or was it Adele?



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