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 I Love Homeschooling!
rookie_visitor

Joined: Sat May 09, 2009 7:24 pm
Posts: 10
Mon Nov 01, 2010 4:46 pm

            My name is Bella, and I'm a third grade drop out. I used to like school because it was fun. Now I cry at the mere thought of going back to that awful place.
 
            School was fun in preschool to first grade because we did alot of art projects and played games.The teachers were fun and exciting.We didn't have much homework and student were not judged for every mistake.
 
             I homeschooled for second grade, but we did alot of moving around so it wasn't much fun. I begged my mom to send me to third grade. I thought I was going to have fun, but I was wrong.
 
 
             First of all, a boy on my bus kicked me out of my seat. Gym was way too hard, and I was forced to participate even though I couldn't breath and tipped over after running. We only had art class on Mondays, and I didn't like music class.
 
             Now I am a proud homeschooler! We have lots of fun at home. I can choose what kind of work I want do. I can be as loud and crazy as I want, and I don't get in trouble. Most of all, I get to spend more time with my family.

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 Re: I Love Homeschooling!
frequent_contributor

Joined: Fri Feb 02, 2007 11:47 am
Posts: 7216
Mon Nov 01, 2010 11:25 pm
Awesome, good for you. :D I personally have been a public school kid my entire life, but it sounds like elementary school was a lot more fun in my district than in yours. In PE, we only ever played games like foursquare and kickball, and we had art class every other day.


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 Re: I Love Homeschooling!
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Joined: Tue Dec 15, 2009 5:22 pm
Posts: 3690
Wed Nov 03, 2010 7:26 pm
     :smileyhappy: I've never been homeschooled before, but it seems like it's pretty cool!!! :smileyhappy:
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 Re: I Love Homeschooling!
regular_contributor

Joined: Mon Dec 21, 2009 9:41 pm
Posts: 1338
Sat Jan 29, 2011 1:41 pm
Yeah!
HOMESCHOOL ROCKS!
*dances*
Oh yeah!
I'm homeschooled if you didn't guess.:smileytongue:
 
~Tatiana~




 Re: I Love Homeschooling!
visitor

Joined: Mon Oct 18, 2010 8:13 pm
Posts: 39
Fri Apr 08, 2011 6:06 pm
I don't do homeschooling. It makes me cry to think of being stuck in my house all day long. School is my only escape. I actually enjoy school.



 Re: I Love Homeschooling!
frequent_vsitor

Joined: Wed Sep 29, 2010 8:09 pm
Posts: 330
Mon Apr 18, 2011 5:58 pm
My name is Bella i'm in 3rd grade



 Re: I Love Homeschooling!

Joined: Wed Jul 20, 2011 6:43 pm
Posts: 3
Wed Jul 20, 2011 7:18 pm
I went to school for Pre School,Kindergarden,and First Grade.From 2nd grade on,I was HOMESCHOOLED.I'm gonna do 5th grade now.My dad schools me.Why? My mom died Why? I don't wanna say.
 
 
 
Alberta



 Re: I Love Homeschooling!
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Joined: Mon Jul 05, 2010 4:13 pm
Posts: 810
Sun Aug 07, 2011 8:35 am
Two of my best friends are homeschooled, and I really want to be.

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 Re: I Love Homeschooling!
regular_contributor

Joined: Fri Sep 02, 2011 12:07 pm
Posts: 1812
Sat Sep 10, 2011 2:42 pm
i'm homeshooled i'm in 12th grade :)



 Re: I Love Homeschooling!
new

Joined: Tue Jan 17, 2012 11:52 pm
Posts: 2025
Tue Jan 29, 2013 9:49 pm
(ianswerit) I AGREE WITH. I WAS BULLIED BEFORE. SO, NOW I HOMESCHOOLED. FROM, dreamtimepink9



 Re: I Love Homeschooling!
new

Joined: Mon Mar 25, 2013 1:44 pm
Posts: 82
Sat Mar 30, 2013 1:01 am
I was homeschooled for one grade, when we were moving, and now I'm in Magnet school. Isn't homeschooling so awesome?!!!



 Re: I Love Homeschooling!
new

Joined: Wed Jul 09, 2014 4:57 pm
Posts: 76
Fri Sep 19, 2014 9:19 pm

I'm homeschooled too! GO homeschoolers!




 Re: I Love Homeschooling!
new

Joined: Mon Nov 16, 2015 2:51 pm
Posts: 2
Tue Nov 17, 2015 2:45 pm

Hi I am homeschooled too I was homeschooled ever scine I was a baby my mom always taught me but when I was in thrid grade I went to (...) Charter School and I am still there right now mabe you could tell your mom about it and you can enroll into my school!laugh




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