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 I'm not a normal girl.

Joined: Thu Jul 21, 2011 11:12 am
Posts: 6
Thu Jul 21, 2011 11:28 am
My mom loves me very much.I know that.She loves my siblings.But sometimes,you know,things that happen make someone so mad or sad,they do something they regret.It happens.We have to take away the ''what ifs'' In our lives and focus on the good things.This is the memoir of my-big family.....
I'm the oldest in my family,at 12.The youngest is my sister Mackayla,at 9 months.I was never used to being ''middle'' or ''youngest'' always ''oldest'' I'm proud of that.
My siblings range from 9 months to around my age.There is Asher,and she is 10.She the closest age to me.There is Alyssa,she's 8.Emily is 6,
Bethany is 4.That's all my siblings.
My mom says it's hard raising 6 children on her own.I don't have a dad.I'm not a normal girl with no dad,and I know other kids have one parent,but I've never had a dad.My mom has never found someone.In twelve years I've been living,Just mom.I wish I had a dad.

 Re: I'm not a normal girl.

Joined: Thu May 19, 2011 11:23 am
Posts: 207
Sun Aug 28, 2011 6:39 am
sad smiley aww, well good luck in your responsibility as the oldest

 Re: I'm not a normal girl.

Joined: Fri Mar 02, 2012 10:05 pm
Posts: 3
Sun Mar 18, 2012 7:40 pm

0aww thats soo cute im the yougest 1 in my family but your lucky that your the oldest:)surprise

 Re: I'm not a normal girl.

Joined: Sun Mar 25, 2012 6:36 pm
Posts: 7
Sun Mar 25, 2012 9:47 pm

Thats so sad I have a dad and a mom but your lucky you have little sisterssadbroken heart

 Re: I'm not a normal girl.

Joined: Sat Jul 09, 2011 9:49 pm
Posts: 29
Tue Mar 27, 2012 7:12 pm

:( i'm sorry about your Dad that sounds really hard, it's cool that your the oldest, i am in my family also

 Re: I'm not a normal girl.

Joined: Fri Mar 23, 2012 11:59 pm
Posts: 18
Sat Mar 31, 2012 7:15 pm

aww! so sad. 


but sorry i cant relate! i have a dad and mom and im an only childindecision

 Re: I'm not a normal girl.

Joined: Sun Dec 09, 2012 4:03 am
Posts: 31
Tue Dec 25, 2012 2:51 am
Nice memoir. I am also proud to be the oldest sibling.

 Re: I'm not a normal girl.

Joined: Mon Mar 25, 2013 1:44 pm
Posts: 82
Fri Mar 29, 2013 2:37 pm
Well at least you can help your mom take care of your sisters. I bet she needs your help.

 Re: I'm not a normal girl.

Joined: Mon Mar 25, 2013 1:44 pm
Posts: 82
Sat Mar 30, 2013 12:58 am
Nice memoir! I'm a twin, but I'm younger than my twin by less than one minute. WAY less. Sorry. I'm a bit sensitive about the minute thing.

 Re: I'm a normal girl. You are too.

Joined: Thu Jul 04, 2013 4:31 am
Posts: 422
Thu Mar 20, 2014 2:46 am
I don't have a father as well... but I'm perfectly normal. My life is EXTREMELY crazy, but one of my friends always says, "You're the most normal girl I've ever met." You're normal as well. I don't feel normal, but everyone is normal and unique. ~Katelyn

 Re: I'm not a normal girl.

Joined: Wed Jun 04, 2014 2:10 am
Posts: 2
Wed Jun 04, 2014 2:29 am

its ok smiley

 Re: I'm not a normal girl.

Joined: Mon May 02, 2016 11:16 pm
Posts: 15
Sat Jul 23, 2016 9:51 pm

I wish i was the oldest (you have a lot of people in your family)

 Re: I'm not a normal girl.

Joined: Sun Nov 20, 2016 10:34 pm
Posts: 35
Fri Jan 06, 2017 10:36 pm

I'm the oldest. I have a dad and a mom. But i do have one thing in common with you( that i know of) I have lots of siblings.3 to be exact.frown

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