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 I'm working on the title, any suggestions?
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Joined: Tue Jan 12, 2016 2:53 am
Posts: 3
Tue Jan 12, 2016 4:16 am

I'm just entering the wonderful world of poetry. Please, I am open to suggestions!cheeky

 

I have lost a friend.

She and I had something great.

But now it's gone.

 

I guess I lost her

Sooner than I'd like to admit.

Way too soon for me.

 

I knew this would come,

I was expecting it, too.

And now, it is here.

 

Looking for love?

Well, let me tell you this:

You're not gonna find it here.

It's gone, and it won't come back.

 

I guess this was a lost cause,

Trying to get you back.

A sailing ship doomed to sink

'Fore it left for sea.

 

Love can be fragile,

But it's the stongest of things.

It can heal any ailment,

Or else it stings.

 

It will hurt me no longer.

I choose to be free!

 
 
 



 Re: I'm working on the title, any suggestions?
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Joined: Tue Feb 02, 2016 2:25 am
Posts: 3
Tue Feb 02, 2016 2:39 am

That's a GREAT poem! I don't have any title ideas, though. Sorry & keep writing!heartyessmiley




 Re: I'm working on the title, any suggestions?
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Joined: Wed Feb 17, 2016 12:28 am
Posts: 31
Wed Mar 02, 2016 9:31 pm

OMG! I totally think "LOST LOVE" would be a great title. My class at school is doing poetry! Keep Up The Good Work! 

 

 

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