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So? What do you think? (Read the outline first)
A. It's good. 25%  25%  [ 1 ]
B. Mmm...I dunno. 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
C. HAHA! It's HILARIOUS! 75%  75%  [ 3 ]
D. No thanks. I don't like it. 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Total votes : 4
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 Idea for a story. What do you think?
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Joined: Wed May 11, 2016 8:01 pm
Posts: 270
Thu May 12, 2016 5:59 pm

So this story doesn't have a name, but the idea of it is that there used to be people with superpowers. Then something happened, I don't know what, and the powers got all mixed up. So now people have powers that are completely useless.

For example, when a girl gets too emotional, she turns into a tree. She walks into school and she sees her crush.

Tree.

She is running from the bad guys, looks behind her, and discovers that they're catching up.

Tree.

Someone sneaks behind her and yells, "Boo!"

"AAAA!" Tree.

There's another person, probably another girl, that whenever she sings, she breaks windows, EVEN WINDOWS BRAND OF TABLET.wink

"WHY, OH WHY CANT I....."

Windows tablets stop working and there are sounds of cafeteria windows shattering.

And a boy has the power to be a mathematical genius at 1:00 to 2:00 in the morning.

Those are the people so far. Hope that the book is a good one!




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